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I am clearly unmotivated right now.
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The simple life is not what most people want to give us anymore, this here is a prime example.
Oh, and no stars, but it still goes in my favorites.
Pretty well done.
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The bad guys kill themselves and eachother!
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1) You can use an original story if you want, you don't have to follow the story of FE 6 & 7, it'd be easier to do something more...original, infact, I'll give you a storyline that you could use.
2) You should be worried about spelling errors, use a dictionary, it will help you, don't ignore spelling mistakes like that...it's makes you seem illiterate. And for grammar mistakes, if your microsoft word doesn't work, then consult your parents, they know this stuff, it's like 2nd nature.
3) Nothing to say there, it's hard to find people who dislike sprite movies, just keep it up there though.
4) Alot of people do that.
5) Try experimenting with different ones though, and try to give proper reactions, effects, better buttons (use Macromedia Fireworks and Adobe Aftereffects for these), better animations (it's 2009, where's the animation improvment?).
6) Pfft, you're worried about their mouths? There's no voice acting so it doesn't matter that much.
7) PROFIT!
8) This definatly isn't a pointless review.
9 & 10) Please get more original names, please, and don't use your name for obvious reasons, Adolfo and Marf different names (keep your real life name though), just don't make the Hitler reference obvious, use complex character development for that (I'll tell you in a PM).
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