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I am clearly unmotivated right now.
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The simple life is not what most people want to give us anymore, this here is a prime example.
Oh, and no stars, but it still goes in my favorites.
Pretty well done.
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The bad guys kill themselves and eachother!
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1) You can use an original story if you want, you don't have to follow the story of FE 6 & 7, it'd be easier to do something more...original, infact, I'll give you a storyline that you could use.
2) You should be worried about spelling errors, use a dictionary, it will help you, don't ignore spelling mistakes like that...it's makes you seem illiterate. And for grammar mistakes, if your microsoft word doesn't work, then consult your parents, they know this stuff, it's like 2nd nature.
3) Nothing to say there, it's hard to find people who dislike sprite movies, just keep it up there though.
4) Alot of people do that.
5) Try experimenting with different ones though, and try to give proper reactions, effects, better buttons (use Macromedia Fireworks and Adobe Aftereffects for these), better animations (it's 2009, where's the animation improvment?).
6) Pfft, you're worried about their mouths? There's no voice acting so it doesn't matter that much.
7) PROFIT!
8) This definatly isn't a pointless review.
9 & 10) Please get more original names, please, and don't use your name for obvious reasons, Adolfo and Marf different names (keep your real life name though), just don't make the Hitler reference obvious, use complex character development for that (I'll tell you in a PM).
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I didn't know about this, lol.
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"Ugh...you guys can do better...."
This was very bad I'm sorry to say, please improve on a few things.
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"Hmm,bout the only decent thing staring Rock Lee..."
The title is as it applies...
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"I know what the sound of the dying is!!!"
Its someone getting raped by Michael Jackson, getting shitted on, pissed on, having a bunch of painful things being stuck up his ass,shitted on,being raped and also being puked on many many times, shitted on, being fucked in all slots(lol.) having dirt and feces thrown on him and then in the end, being killed in a way so graphic that I just can't say it.
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Well your close.
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Very good physics and quite addicting
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Because I wanted to give a 10...
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"The Day The Earth Stode Still" was a bad movie too, you should do that one.
oh and that thing about the girls thinking that the vampire was "hot" pfft
I knew they would like him when I saw the first trailer.
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